[I know. There are some who’d want poems to start like:
something something dendrites,
wet snow evaporating on
Jeep’s red hood action vacillating
between thought and libido
in empty church parking lot’s
unquestionable hour
and later maybe:
something something father,
feet on workshop cement
circular saw’s perfect axis
dropping wet snow sawdust
in any case, after a number of stanzas, I could end with:
something something lamprey mouth,
we as children didn’t understand
the light balanced on a shoulder
with delicate forbidden temerity.
No—it makes me want to puke. So “pretty” and obstructionist. Yuck!]
Joe Hogle lives in Pittsburgh, PA. He is also known as Poopsmithey.